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Re:On my knees...
« Reply #1 on: 2003-08-06 06:49:23 » |
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Excellent story construction, good visualization.
Hope you plan on taking your poetry further.
You should post more.
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With or without religion, you would have good people doing good things and evil people doing evil things. But for good people to do evil things, that takes religion. - Steven Weinberg, 1999
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Re:On my knees...
« Reply #3 on: 2003-08-06 07:12:32 » |
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Woah! Why not post them all on a thread for your poetry - as most of the other members have done?
Keeps the board looking much more attractive. Also, you mght like to edit the apostrophes - the BBS is not doing very well with a true apostrophe, a single quote is better.
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